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Reading : 29
Listening : 25
Speaking : 19
Writing : 28
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Total : 101
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¼±»ý´ÔÀÇ "thatºÎÅÍ °ýÈ£ ¿°í ¹®Àå ³¡±îÁö¿ä~"ÀÇ ³ª±Ù³ª±ÙÇÑ ¸ñ¼Ò¸®°¡ Áö±Ýµµ ±Í¿¡ µé·Á¿É´Ï´Ù. ¸ÕÀú ¹«¾ùº¸´Ùµµ ¼±»ý´Ô²² Á˼ÛÇÑ °ÍÀº ¼±»ý´Ô ½Ã°£¿¡ ¸¹ÀÌ Á¹¾Ò´Ù´Â °ÍÀÔ´Ï´Ù...¤Ì¤Ì ¾ÆÄ§ ÀÏÂï ÀϾ ½ºÅ͵𸦠ÇÏ°í ¿À´Ù º¸´Ï °¡²û¾¿ ½Ã°£ÀÌ Ã˹ÚÇØ¼ Ä¿ÇÇ¶óµµ ¸ø ¸¶½Å °æ¿ì ³Ê¹« ÀáÀÌ ¿Í¼ ±×·¨´ø °ÍÀÌ´Ù º¸´Ï.. ÀÌÇØ¸¦ ºÎʵ右´Ï´Ù.^^ Áß°£¿¡ ¸ñÀÌ ¾È ÁÁÀº Àûµµ ÀÖÀ¸½Ã°í ¸¹ÀÌ Èûµé°í ¹Ù»Ú¼ÌÀ» °Çµ¥ ¸¶Áö¸·±îÁö ¿½ÉÈ÷ °ÀÇÇØÁּż ´ë´ÜÈ÷ °¨»çÇÕ´Ï´Ù.
´ÙÀ½À¸·Î ListeningÀÇ ÃÖÁö¿í ¼±»ý´Ô,
¾Æ½±°Ôµµ Listening¿¡¼ ¾öû³ °íµæÁ¡À» ÇÏÁö´Â ¸øÇÏ¿´Áö¸¸,,,À̰ÍÀº º¹½ÀÀ» °ÔÀ»¸®ÇÑ ÀúÀÇ Å¿ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.¤Ì¤Ì Á¦°¡ 12¿ù¿¡ ¼±»ý´Ô ¼ö¾÷¿¡ ¿ö³«¿¡ ¸¹ÀÌ ºüÁö°í ³î·¯´Ù³à¼ ¼±»ý´ÔÀÌ Àú¸¦ ½È¾îÇÏ½Ã¸é ¾î¼³ªÇÏ°í °ÆÁ¤À» ¸¹ÀÌ Çß½À´Ï´Ù. ±×·³¿¡µµ ºÒ±¸Çϰí 1¿ù ÇÑ ´Þµ¿¾È ¼ö¾÷½Ã°£¿¡ Áú¹®µµ ÇØÁֽðí Àß Ã¬°ÜÁּż ´ë´ÜÈ÷ °í¸¿½À´Ï´Ù. ¼±»ý´ÔÀÇ ¿Á¤ÀûÀÎ °ÀÇ´Â Á¦°¡ ¼³¸íÇϱâ Èûµé Á¤µµ·Î ´ë´ÜÇÕ´Ï´Ù! Ç×»ó ÁöÄ¡Áö ¾ÊÀ¸½Ã°í Èûµå½Ã´õ¶óµµ Ç×»ó ¹àÀº ¸ð½ÀÀ» º¸¿©µå¸®·Á´Â ¼±»ý´ÔÀÇ ¸ð½À¿¡ Ç×»ó °¨µ¿À» ´À³¢°í °¨»çÇÔÀ» ´À³§´Ï´Ù. Ç×»ó ¿¼ºÀûÀÌ°í ¿Á¤ÀûÀÎ °ÀǸ¦ ÇÏ½Ç ¼ö Àֱ⸦ ¹Ù¶ø´Ï´Ù. ±×¸®°í Á¡¼ö°¡ »ý°¢º¸´Ù Àß ³ª¿Í¼,, "¿©¸§¹æÇÐ ¶§ ´Ù½Ã ¼ö¾÷ µéÀ»°Å´Ï±ñ ³Ê¹« ¾Æ½¬¿ö ÇÏÁö ¸¶¼¼¿ä."¶ó´Â ¸»Àº Ãë¼ÒÇÕ´Ï´Ù.¤»¤»
´ÙÀ½À¸·Î SpeakingÀÇ Eileen¼±»ý´Ô,
Sorry, Eileen¤Ì¤Ì Of all the scores I have received, my speaking score is the lowest.. Actually, I tried my best to improve my speaking, but since my reading and listening was not that good at the beginning of the January, and I put much more importance in studying reading and listening, I had not much time to improve my pronunciation and intonation. Even though I have fairly good accent but it is too hard to have an appropriate intonation and pronunciation. Therefore I am going to practice pronunciation and intonation using your µû¶óÀбâÀÚ·á so that I can have a better TOEFL score by receiving a high grade in Speaking. I appreciate your lecture and hope to attend your class again. And as you said in September, 2006 in my speaking class when the Hackers was around Samsung station, from now on, I would now try to think myself a lot, not just memorizing your answer.^^
¸¶Áö¸·À¸·Î, WritingÀÇ ¼Û¿ø¼±»ý´Ô,
ÀúÀÇ poor ÇÑ ³í¸®·ÂÀ» Ű¿öÁֽм±»ý´ÔÀÇ °ÀǸ¦ µéÀ¸¸é¼ ´ëÀÔ ³í¼úÀ» º¸±â Àü¿¡ ¼±»ý´ÔÀ» 뵜´õ¶ó¸é ³í¼úÀ» ´õ Àß º¸Áö ¾Ê¾ÒÀ»±î ÇÏ´Â »ý°¢±îÁö ÇÏ°Ô µË´Ï´Ù. ¼±»ý´Ô ´öºÐ¿¡ TS-GS-SD·Î À̾îÁö´Â ¸ð¹üÀûÀÎ essayÀÇ ±¸¼ºÀ» È®½ÇÇÏ°Ô ¾Ë°Ô µÇ¾ú½À´Ï´Ù. ±×¸®°í Writing¿¡¼ °íµæÁ¡ ÇÒ ¼öµµ ÀÖ¾ú°í¿ä. ³Ê¹«³ª °¨»çµå¸³´Ï´Ù. It would help me not only writing English essay but also writing in Korean. Ç×»ó À¯¸Ó ³ÑÄ¡´Â ¼ö¾÷ÀÌ ³Ê¹« Àç¹ÌÀÖ¾ú°í ¼±»ý´ÔÀÇ ¿¬±â·ÂÀº Çæ¸®¿ìµå ±ÞÀ» ¶Ù¾î³Ñ½À´Ï´Ù.¤»¤» Àú´Â ¾ÆÁ÷µµ ¼±»ý´Ô²²¼ "Ä£±¸°¡ À½ÁÖ¿îÀü ÇÏ·Á´Â °ÍÀ» ¸»¸®Áö ¸øÇÏ¿© Ä£±¸°¡ Á×¾ú´Ù"¶ó°í ¸»¾¸ÇÏ½Ç ¶§ ÁøÂ¥ À̾߱âÀÎÁÙ ¾Ë°í¼±,, "Çä....;;;"Çß´ø °ÍÀ» ÀØÁö ¸øÇÕ´Ï´Ù¤»¤» À̰Š¿©±â °Ô½ÃÆÇ¿¡ ¾²¸é ¼±»ý´ÔÀÇ À̾߱⿡ ½ºÆ÷ÀÏ·¯°¡ µÇ´Â°ÍÀΰ¡¿ä....;;?¤»¤» ¾Æ ±×¸®°í ¼±»ý´Ô, µµ´ëü ±èÁØÀÌ ´©±¸ÁÒ? Ȥ½Ã ù»ç¶ûÀº ¾Æ´Ï½ÅÁö¿ä?¤»¤»¤» and sorry teacher, I was trying to write letter written in English to you as well as the letter to Eileen since you teach writing but I'm just so scared about your comment! you know I don't want to be commented about my writing even in this bulletin board¤»¤»
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